Nowadays, more and more women decide to have children later in their life? Why? Does the advantage or disadvantage?
Women now seem to have babies later than in the past. I believe this tendency is positive and comes from the mounting independence of women.
The decision of having babies late by women mainly comes from the fact that women nowadays are more independent than they used to be. In the past, job opportunities for women are so limited that they hardly afforded their life and had to depend on men. Today, women are given the same opportunity as men if they are qualified; therefore, women tend to spend more time studying and working to get promoted in the workplace rather than seeking men as providers for their financial situations. However, it often takes women about 5 to 10 years after leaving colleges to be successful and during this period, they are less likely to have babies because they are too busy at work. As a result, more and more women postpone their plans of getting pregnant because they want to prioritize on the career path.
I believe this tendency is positive because it allows women to have time to prepare for their mental status and financial plans. In terms of psychology, when women are at middle-aged, they went through various difficulties in life, which makes them experienced and well-tempered. As a result, they may have less anxiety when getting pregnant and better understanding when nurturing their children. On the financial side, living single in a long time before having children helps women to well accumulate for both themselves and their offspring. Thanks for that, women would have enough money to send their kids to reputed schools to ensure the best educational environment for the child.
In conclusion, having babies late is more popular among women today and this is good for women at both the finance and mentality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91638795987 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56901908556 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1747561839 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299030852306 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122978707916 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559109298925 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184957415474 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409755778955 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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