Nowadays, the Olympic Games play less important roles in the world in 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?
There is an assertion that the Olympic Games are not as paramount as centuries ago. I am not in the same wavelength with this view due to its significant influence on motiving the public to exercise regularly and facilitating international communication.
One of the conspicuous reason of the importance of the Olympic Games is it invigorates the public to engage in sports. By watching cornucopia of competitions in the Olympic Games, people may develop their interests in certain sports and want to have a try by themselves. For example, Chinese people are fascinated about table tennis, because Chinese players always win in the Olympic Games and thus people of all walks tend to play this sport as a hobby. If the Olympic Games are abandoned, residents from all the countries may be less encouraged to do sports and tend to live an inactive and sedentary lifestyle.
It might be argued that nowadays people are bombarded with a wide array of exercising and recreational options, thus the Olympic Games are no longer needed to raise the public’s attention toward sports. However, I am skeptical that this could be the reason of discarding the Olympic Games, since they are not mutually exclusive. In my opinion, despite the benefits to the general public, the Olympic Games serve as an important international event that gathers sports players all over the world and encourage them to communicate, exchange ideas and form friendship with each other. Every four year, it is the Olympic Games that make countries set aside disputes and conflicts and enjoy a feast of sports.
To recapitulate, the Olympic Games ought to be emphasized and appreciated now and in many decades to come, because they serve as a catalyst for the public fitness and international communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...my opinion, despite the benefits to the general public, the Olympic Games serve as an importan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08532423208 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94779008558 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539249146758 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6991599829 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.454545455 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191676904111 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792633028785 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441764151871 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108186871586 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487174761798 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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