Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some people advocate that individuals ought to compromise with the tough situations such as low salary or unsatisfied jobs, while others suggest to demolish plights and discover new possibilities. I am in the same wavelength with the latter view.
Some people believe that sticking to the current deficient life can seize what they have owned. For example, accepting a low-paid job can at least guarantee stable source of income. However, I reckon that this view is much conservative, because without discarding the evils and moving forward, people will be stuck in woes and never gain the possibility of success. Even a promising prospect cannot be guaranteed, individuals will not regret that they didn’t strive for a brighter future and in most cases, people will not end up with harvesting nothing after making efforts.
Alternatively, other people support to make the difference by searching for solutions and improvements and I agree with this view, because escaping from the miserable status quo is the key to happiness. For example, lovers can find the true love after finishing a heart-breaking relationship; job hoppers can land a satisfied job given that they resigned from an annoying one. Without brave and drastic shifts, the contentment may be slipped through one’s finger and they may live in guilty and complaint for the rest of their lives. Besides that, I believe that it is the improvements invigorate social progression and civilization. For instance, the liberation and democracy of the US was brought by African black slaves’ rebellion; the invention of electricity was triggered by people’s yearn to not living in the dark.
To recapitulate, it is my opinion that folks shouldn’t passively embrace all the difficulties in life but vigorously look for improvements and solutions, which is the catalyst for a decent life and societal advancement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest demolishing'.
Suggestion: suggest demolishing
...alary or unsatisfied jobs, while others suggest to demolish plights and discover new possibilities....
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...os;s yearn to not living in the dark. To recapitulate, it is my opinion that f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, may, so, while, at least, for example, for instance, i reckon, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37123745819 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10007647579 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635451505017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2486419589 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.833333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14109653747 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520582591601 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313143986522 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816460353667 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281323667024 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.