Nowadays people are affected by social media and the Internet. Is it a good or a bad trend, in your opinion? Explain it by giving your own examples.
As per the report by Oxford University, a person spend an average of 2 hours daily on online browsing. Some people believe that internet and social networking websites have greatly impacted people's life. In my opinion, this trend has positive progression and the reasons shall be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, with the use of social media websites people are now able to stay connected with their friends. Before the commencement of social networking sites, it was difficult for people to stay in contact with their old friends. Nowadays, almost everyone have created their profiles on the online social platforms such as Facebook, hence, people can do a simple search get in touch with their fellows. For instance, as per the recent survey by local newspaper, 90℅ of the people agreed that they prefer social media over phone or personal meeting, to stay connected with their friends.
By using internet, people can now study at the comfort of their home. This is to say that people who cannot afford to go to big cities and spend money on expensive educational institutes, can also study by enrolling in internet based online courses. Thus, people can even study an international university course, while being in their own country. As per the report published by Harvard University, approximately 45℅ of the students prefer to take admission in internet based courses because they can do such course at their own pace and even while continuing their jobs.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that use of social websites and internet has made a pragmatic impact in people's life because of easy connectivity with friends and access to study programs. Even I am using internet from last ten years, certainly it had helped a lot in my studies. It is predicted that by 2025, 90% of courses will be made available by the universities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00964630225 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65287537376 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549839228296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7702264441 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157896311209 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622323758836 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367276486355 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997044892709 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212536023021 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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