School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that teachers have increased accountability for pupils' societal and mental skill development as compared to parents. I strongly agree with this view, and in this essay I will shed some light on the reasons for this agreement.
To begin with, the main reason to believe teachers are more responsible is that the teachers have required skills and qualifications to teach the students. This is because teachers are trained for many years to attain these skill-sets, which help them to easily understand a child's mental learning capability. Teachers can then adapt the best approach to improve students' societal behavior and conceptual intelligence. For instance, as per the recent report by Indian Express, 90% of the teachers confirmed that they are taught about various child psychological patterns, so that they can pursue the best teaching approach for a student.
In addition to this, children spend the major proportion of their day in schools with their teachers, thus children learn a lot from their teachers' behavior. This is to say that the teachers can provide the best learning environment for a child because children learn from what they see. If teachers demonstrate good social skills, the students will be influenced and reciprocate the same behavior. Furthermore, teachers assign them various team building exercises and mental tasks so that their brain develops.
To conclude, I completely agree with the viewpoint that teachers have more responsibility for developing students' social skills and rational behavior than parents because students spend mostly of their time at school and teachers have professional skill-sets to teach the students.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42366412214 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83084941468 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.621796921 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.181818182 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274231463472 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107437918914 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721886974672 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183268335224 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710343180681 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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