Nowadays people are spending more time in workplace and staying away from home for work Discuss its advantages and disadvantages with your own experiences

In this rapidly growing world where time is money,people are asked to spend more time at work. This is to catch up the huge competition around. In order to fulfill the work responsibilities we often need to stay away from home. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this issue broadly.
Lets take a look at the advantages first. If we spend a lot of time at work, we can ultimately prove our dedication towards the work.Does this help us grow? Yes,for sure.People who work overtime are often recognized and promoted instead of others.Even though it is a tough task,what else does an employee seek rather than recognition.Unless we are recognized its hard to survive in this cut throat competition.Thus a lot of us spend more time at work.
High pay scales has been the other benefit of working in excess. Who doesn't want money? The primary goal of any individual is to earn. Not only serving our needs, money also represents our stature in the society these days.
Although there are good benefits this has some disadvantages too .One major effect of long working hours is high stress.It is mostly observed in software employees that their work increases their stress levels adversely.This may have a huge impact on ones mental ability.
Lack of time for family has been the major disadvantage. If there is one thing to be given priority, Its family. Most of us work to keep our family happy and comfortable. But in the present scenario most of us are preoccupied by work that we fail to spend some time with family.
In the overview of the above mentioned events there should be a good balance between work and home. Its important to grows but equally we must take care of our family too.

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Average: 7.1 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74247491639 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79014367639 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591973244147 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.8816610735 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7777777778 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27777777778 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277109987544 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771064139916 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065352163388 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129029092936 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830605937199 0.056905535591 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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