Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are the problems? Do you think thr government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
People residing in metropolitan towns come across a number of issues on daily basis. The increase in migration of people from small towns to large towns is root cause of many problems. In my opinion, the government should encourage decentralization of metropolitan towns and make people move to smaller towns.
The main problem faced by residents of large towns is small and limited residential area which force people to live in small apartments. This leads lower income group and economically weaker sections live in non-habitable areas which lack basic infrastructure facilities like water supply, sewerage and solid waste management which are essential to live quality of life. Moreover, these towns lack good recreational areas which important for development of children. Another problem faced by residents of metros is long hours of commuting to work from home which disturb the work-life balance. In other words, many hours daily are wasted on unproductive travelling which could be put to better use. In addition, this commuting wastes lot of petrol which is a major cause of pollution in metro cities.
Looking into the reason above it is evident that this uncontrolled urban agglomeration should be discouraged by government to better quality of life to metro residents. Each town should be pre-planned to cater only certain amount of population and migration should be completely banned after attaining that population. In addition, government should facilitate smaller towns with better facilities like employment opportunities, better public transport, malls, and recreational areas. This will encourage migration to smaller towns to much extend.
In conclusion, people living in metro cities especially lower income group people face number of problems from basic infrastructure to pollution. It is high time government should step in and make people to move to smaller towns by facilitating them with better facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51342281879 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98342530313 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536912751678 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2788061171 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.533333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331469638606 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119408451349 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852642041954 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229042105439 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962827984236 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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