Nowadays, people move from one country to another for work. Some people think children of these families suffer because of this, while others think it is helpful for them. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Many people, in this age, transit to other countries for better job opportunities. A few people believe such movement from their country could have adverse effects on their children, while others consider it might be beneficial for them. I strongly believe that children of migrating parents would be benefitted in the long run as they would be exposed to niche education.
On the one hand, one major reason to believe children would suffer post migration is difficulties in adapting to new learning and survival atmosphere. As they are exposed to a totally different culture, language and surrounding, they might feel insecure. A study from UK, to illustrate, says children of families who decide to migrate face initial obstacles to merge into the education system of the destined country. However, these inconsiderate fears could be resolved over time when children make efforts to learn about a country’s culture in depth.
On the other hand, few people consider migration could be fruitful for children and I agree. This is majorly because of high class education the children are exposed to. In other words, since they have an array of new different learning opportunities to explore and excel at, they might gain confidence in the long run and perform better in their possible university education. Further, when they return to their native country, they are classified affluent. A Cambridge University survey reveals 78% of their student pass outs, each year, are migrants and perform better in academics than the local students, which brightens their future and gives them an edge over other competitors.
In conclusion, although there are initial difficulties faced by children when their families migrate to other country, however, I undoubtedly believe they are largely benefitted in long run by the quality education they receive and hold a luxury status in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Many people, in this age, transit to other countries for better job opport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28476821192 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76201022728 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8324451841 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182011581801 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742097889879 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638245311767 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116115010082 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533603338407 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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