Nowadays people pay attention more about fashion, is it good trend or not. Give your opinion and examples based on your experience.
Today fashion has taken a dignified place in our society consideration. According to their nature, personality and reckoning occasions, such youngsters implement fashion or hairstyles. However, a person with beauty in his behavior and knowledge can make a greater impact than such external decoration.
This trend is having an adverse impact, not only in the fiscal position of common man, but also on the mental standing of the masses. Some people believe that fashion has a high price to pay. For example-: the bags of Prada, a fashion house, although are excellent but too expensive.. Secondly, most of the fashionable clothes or shoes are very expensive. Buying such clothes can lead to a hole in the pocket. People often to show off buy such phones in loan.
In the olden days, there used to be a few brands only and their prices were not much high. But with the advent of the twenty first century, the brand culture has gained much acclaim and today there is new band register every single day. The reason behind this is consumers have access to more variation of styles and brands than before. Obviously, competition between different international companies has led them to generate more different brands with specific logos. As a prime example, while only Adidas, Nike, Puma or Reebok were the leading sportswear by the year 1990, more different sports clothing have been allowed to be produced with different names after that time, like Columbia or Asics. As a result, users have more options to select their favorite clothes and change their interest based on the latest model.
From my point of view, this way of living can and will have more drawbacks. The first reason behind it is that individuals may forget the quality. Clearly, considering which materials are used in a dress can be far important than its name. For instance, we may pay just over $100 for a Dolce & Gabbana shirt, which is almost five times we have to pay for a CHAPS one, whereas the quality and longevity of the latter could be far better than the former. In addition, the rate of consumerism has grown far considerably. Citizens are exposed to more fashion goods, causing them to spend more money on unnecessary items.
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- Nowadays people pay attention more about fashion, is it good trend or not. Give your opinion and examples based on your experience. 84
- Nowadays people pay attention more about fashion, is it good trend or not. Give your opinion and examples based on your experience. 84
- Nowadays people pay attention more about fashion, is it good trend or not. Give your opinion and examples based on your experience. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...although are excellent but too expensive.. Secondly, most of the fashionable cloth...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88563829787 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52544133201 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609042553191 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5088682934 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4761904762 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119505317197 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359372465265 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383410261411 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704273669464 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342531112335 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.