Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants.Why do you think people waste food?What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
At a time when most poor countries do not have essential food and most children are malnourished. In other countries, people are throwing away food with their misuse.I will state the reasons for this and offer ways to reduce food waste in the world.
Food is one of the most pressing needs of every person in society. Many countries in the world, especially African countries, are deprived of this. And every year, many people are victimized by malnutrition in these countries.But in developed countries, thousands of tons of food are dumped annually. There are many reasons for this. One of the reasons is that people are not placed in absolute poverty.Because they don't think anyone in the world has spent several days without food.So much so that even these people are looking for food in the trash can.Or it could be because the food prices are too low in these countries. Statistics show that crop prices have fallen by 2% compared to previous years.On the other hand, people buy too much. And after a few days, they have to throw them away because of food deterioration.Or they order more food at restaurants than they can handle. And many extra foods are wasted.
There are many ways to avoid food waste. First, people need to buy as much as they need, and if they find they need too much, donate them to needy and beneficiary institutions before they are destroyed.Secondly, there are nowadays institutions that contract with restaurants to pack extra food and deliver it.And these institutions distribute these food packages to the poor.The government can, of course, play a role in improving this, by using the mass media to raise public awareness and maximize the people's role in saving.It can also adopt laws that are effective in food waste.
In conclusion,I believe that the lack of awareness of people in other countries about the scarcity of substances and the lack of proper legislation has led to an increase in food waste, which can be resolved by adopting proper laws and public education and by establishing charities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93930635838 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74472907696 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517341040462 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.756968058 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.461538462 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367920079935 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131311599973 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884800500283 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225289470676 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687287566371 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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