Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor in the development of a country.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Education plays an impressive role in the overall development of a country, and some people believe that education is the most important institution for the development of a country.I agree and will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.
Today, education as a social institution that is responsible for the education and training of individuals in the community has received the attention of many people, officials and thinkers, who all believe that the growth and development of a country is fostered. It depends on the knowledgeable and responsible people.Education by educating people and changing their attitudes can serve the greatest role in development because we know that one of the major barriers to backwardness in underdeveloped countries is cultural barriers, such as an understanding of development and Or they do not care about the importance of working to build communities and are ignorant of them, and education can make the biggest contribution to the development of backward communities by changing or modifying their views. The importance of human resource education in the development of advanced societies is to the extent that they devote a large amount of their funding to research, which can be attributed to the success of research and its impact on the fundamental evolution and scientific structure of those countries.
Investing in education is a key factor in the process of economic growth and development. Human capital requires educational activities. On the one hand, investing enhances the capabilities of the workforce and, on the other hand, enhances the workforce to make better use of new technology. The production provides.Investment is a major driver of economic growth and in general means all costs that contribute to maintaining, surviving and increasing production capacity as well as generating revenue. These costs include not only material investment in facilities, equipment, stockpiles, and natural resource development, but also human capital, research and development, education, in-service training, health and labor displacement. Most economists
They believe that a lack of investment in human capital is in fact the main cause of the slowdown in economic growth in developing countries, and as long as these countries have not upgraded their professional skills, labor and capital productivity and efficiency will remain low. Economic growth is slower and with higher costs.
In conclusion,I believe that education by educating human beings plays a key role in the social and economic development of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, in general, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 8.3376753507 396% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56818181818 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31547385004 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492424242424 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.25005291 49.4020404114 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.75 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185282738549 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711771619396 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625619915134 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116083963906 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698509895272 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.06 50.2224549098 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.5 9.78957915832 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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