There is one surging concern that money carrying methods are changed like most of person prefer to use credit or debit cards for money rather than paper notes or coins. In my opinion the advantages of this method can easy overwhelm the disadvantage of this.
To commence with, there are myriad of things in favour of aforementioned view point. First and foremost one is that, it made the life very easy and without any risk. To extent it, most of the people think that modern method brings alot of merits because it is easy to carry a large amount of money just in one card without any high risk. It donot reduce stress related to carrying big amount of cash but also make us responsible for only important things.
Futhermore, another thing is that the credit or debit card are used anywhere. To exemplify it, any American person visited any another nation and want to chnge currency owing to buy things which are needed can easy exchange it with the help of credit or debit card.Therefore it is clear that in this modern epoch why technical methods are used.
As it is truly said that,"each coin has two faces",and it is totally applied in it, if the credit and debit cards are having merits on the other hand it has some demerits as well. The ATMs donot contain money sometimes,so it create situation which seems to be just like a hot potato while if person will have some cash in pocket it seems to be just like dime a dazon. Therefore, all the merits and demerits are mentioned.
In conclusion, it is crystal clear that although money in the appearance of cash is crucial but debit and credit methods are more important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, while, another thing, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61643835616 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48328999867 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537671232877 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4264359918 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196853904077 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728920398863 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661656067543 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121655266819 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697786594208 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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