One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that the handsome pay is important rather than the satisfaction from job.There is wide spread worry that it would lead myriad of concerns in one's life.In my opinion this apprehension is warranted and accepted.
To commence with, there are deluge of arguments in favour of job satisfaction.The most preponderant one is that the handsome salary can give a person comfort but not respect.To extent it, the person who do better work can get various experiences while the handsome payment persons only do work with high risks.To exemplify it,Mr. Banjamine bradle,the editor of chief in 'The Washington Post' states in his editorial that ' respect is most important in job'.
Furthermore,another pivotal aspect of this aforementioned is likely to help excel and thrive in varied areas.Besides,job satisfaction can provide various other opportunities to the person which is good at their work. For instance,the study results published by the government of Australia in May 2012 and March 2014 clearly indicate that the job satisfaction is good for better life.Therefore,it is clear that why some are in favour of my view point.
On the other hand,the section of society contradicts the above-said.they pondered over that the money can give each and every happiness in life because the money can offer various ways to person to enjoy the life.Therefore, it is clear that the why some are not in favour of my view point.
To conclude that, having pondered over it is crystal clear that the benefits of satisfaction from job is indeed to great dire to be ignored.
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- Many people believe that the lecture halls have been replaced by online learning To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08791208791 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15490318509 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.8236792511 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 231.5 106.682146367 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.5 20.7667163134 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.3333333333 7.06120827912 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125499484069 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623826119616 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317348043135 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665963665922 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343268183498 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.0946893788 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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