Nowadays, some celebrities such as film stars, sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which jobs should be highly paid?
People have adopted different kind of occupations in their life according to their choice or obligations and are getting varied salaries according to their job. In today's era, famous people like actor, actresses, players, musicians etcetera are receiving high salary as compared to others. In my opinion, I do not believe that celebrities have received more salary. I am going to explain my point of view in following paragraphs and describe about the jobs which should be paid more.
I believe that film stars, sportsmen, musicians get salary according to their capability. In order to achieve success, everyone has to work hard and in order to become celebrities, people have made a lot of efforts. Only well known personalities are receiving good income. For instance, a person worked really hard and with full dedication to become a successful football player. After becoming well known player, he is playing for his nation and by winning medals, he is able to make his country feel proud. In similar manner, film stars and pop musicians are trying to eradicate the social issues with which their country is suffering by giving message to the public through their movies or songs respectively. So, they are getting money according to their capability and hard work, they are doing.
Beside that jobs of nurses are not paying them good income. Nurses are serving the country by saving the life of individuals. They are doing a lot for the human welfare without any expectations. So, they should be paid more salary. Moreover, the workers working in small factories are performing their jobs for more than nine to ten hours per day and are not paid good salary. So, they are not even able to meet their basic needs. Due to such conditions of the country, most of the population is under poverty line.
In conclusion, I would like to say that no employment is superior or inferior. Employees should be paid salary on the basis of amount of work done but not depending upon the standard of the occupation they are doing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9011627907 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58340457109 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55523255814 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1447445004 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18795497353 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540398296739 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594823885246 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110776524603 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266014692621 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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