Nowadays, some celebrities such as film stars, sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which jobs should be highly paid?
Life of celebrities is discussed among all ages of people. Some of them argue if the high payment of the stars is justified. In fact, they have to maintain the standard of living like a celebrity, so I agree on that. I this essay, the reason behind the a public star’s attractive remuneration will be discussed along with a focus on other jobs deserving high pay-off.
Filmstars, pop musicians and sportsmen are public figures, so they are required to maintain an expensive lifestyle. Firstly, the general people are curious about what the celebrities eat, what they wear and what vehicle they ride. Here, maintaining uniqueness in all aspects is the key to get more popularity among the rivals which costs them very high price. To retain the prestidge, stars are bound to earn giant remuneration. Secondly, the sportsmen as well as artists keep trying new technological inventios in their field with the purpose of increasing performance. Such technologies are not meant for specific people only, as a result the expense to retain such wonder becomes uncomparable. To stay competitive, the athletes have no choice but to try new ways of improving their outcome. So they require a large sum of money to continue their journey to be the number-one.
Apart from the expensive life of stars, there are other jobs like fire service and medical service requiring healthy payments. These two professions require complete dedication of persons to deliver services to the citizens, even by their lives. In USA, for example, a report showed that 23 firemen die each year during rescue operation. No doubt, most of those firemen were the wage-earners of their family. So to ensure that they perform their best, it is important to make them feel that they are financially solvent. Moreover, such scheme can motivate the doctors and firemen to focus on work.
Critics continue criticizing the payments to public-stars, though a celebriti’s expensive life-style eats-up most of his income. Doctors and firemen deserves to be paid high as well, if we want them to stay focued on providing services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, in fact, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12463768116 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84813547016 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602898550725 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8875435843 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153355529594 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396638506689 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034363982934 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910403346554 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344214788806 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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