Nowadays, sport is becoming a business and more in more professional and pick companies are getting involved in sporting events. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Many private organizations have been investing in different sporting events since the last decade, and in fact, they see sport as a source of income. It has both pros and cons. Personally; I believe that the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh clearly its disadvantages because the privatization of sports has become essential in certain nations.
Proponents of the non-governments firms in sports cite a host of benefits. It has been observed that many traditional games are forgotten by people due to one or more reasons. When any third-party looks after such games, definitely, it provides a good platform for those sports like Kho-Kho and Kabaddi. They provide the best of facilities to the players for their training, and even, a handsome amount of remuneration, which might not be fulfilled by any government. Pro kabaddi championship league in India is a great example of privatization in this sport.
In addition, the rewards which game players earn through matches encourage many people to make their career in such forgotten sports. More and more talents would come to participate, and this how, a particular nation would be benefited through indirect ways. As a result, such sports would be carried forward into the next generations.
On the other hand, people see a business as profit and loss. The team owner may cross any limit in order to prevent the loss of his or her investment. Consequently, there always remains a threat of match fixing which is the worst side of any game. And, this is completely non-productive for anyone. In 2015, many cricketers from different teams of Indian premier league of cricket, for example, found convicted as guilty for match fixing and they ruined the image of India in the world.
In conclusion, I reiterate that all the governments may not fund all the sports. So, it becomes necessary for private firms to enter in sports management. I believe that such privatization would foster a fruitful amount of benefits for the nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, may, so, third, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90048484121 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582317073171 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0100898051 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4736842105 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137582399988 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418687604739 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431399456667 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789729960323 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394822031732 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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