It is thought by many people, that it is worthless to watch sports in their free time .I completely disagree with this statement ,as sports just not enhances one’s knowledge at a broader spectrum but also gives a great relaxation to the individuals.
Firstly, in this contemporary world, people are undergoing many stress related issues, whether in their workplaces or in their personal lives, with almost no work-life balance. So, adapting or incorporating certain stress buster activities such as watching sports in their daily routine would be a great sigh of relief to the people. Also, watching sports just not serve as a recreational activity, but also it provides great knowledge about current trending sports information.
Secondly, very often, interest in sports help people in making career decisions. Now a day’s many youngsters developed a lot of attention towards watching sports or by themselves taking part in them. It is also said that, a lot of people get influenced or motivated by several sports players which in turn help them in choosing sports as their career move. Furthermore , there are kind of people who have set many players as their role models and made great progress in their professional lives .To exemplify, in a recent survey reported by a famous magazine ‘Times’ , more than 23% of the youngsters quoted that they want to become sports players by considering the current players as their role models .
To conclude, not always watching sports serves to fulfill their free time, but also it benefits people in multiple ways in their life.
- Some people think that watching sport is wastage of time during leisure time. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- If you sell a product and the people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and considered as a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree ? Give an example from your experience to support your opinion. 67
- Some people say that holding sport competitions cause many troubles, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- Some people think that the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 78
- Sugar consumption is too harmful Some say it is governments responsibility to limit sugar intake while others say it s individual who are responsible Discuss both the views and give your own opinion 89
In the contempatary era …
In the contempatary era ,sports is the very important and crucial factor common people are wathching sports In their busy schedules as well as free time moreover, some citizen believe that That the showing sports is the waste of time is showing sports is wastage time mean while, this essay contract to given assession starting my valid reasons.
To commence with though there are several example in the ensuing paragraph. The human kind spand a quality time for the family in the free time.they have to arrange a small picnic for the family.and enjoy with them.they make this day so memorable for instance, in the survey of times of India is that the most of the people are Most of the common society have arrange the short tour for the family the family members are also close to each other and increase understanding between them
To elaborate mankind was read a legend ‘ biography like Apj Abdul Kalam ,narendra Modi etc further more they increase there knowledge and learn to best quality form them for instance, apj abdul Kalam is 8th pass but he is become president of the our country.
Some layman is watching sports because the most of the matches arrange in the weekends. Few menkind are more enthusiastic for watching match for them free time and they do not spend special time with family moreover, they waste time in leisure activities.and they are feel lazy.
In the contempatary era …
In the contempatary era ,sports is the very important and crucial factor common people are wathching sports In their busy schedules as well as free time moreover, some citizen believe that That the showing sports is the waste of time is showing sports is wastage time mean while, this essay contract to given assession starting my valid reasons.
To commence with though there are several example in the ensuing paragraph. The human kind spand a quality time for the family in the free time.they have to arrange a small picnic for the family.and enjoy with them.they make this day so memorable for instance, in the survey of times of India is that the most of the people are Most of the common society have arrange the short tour for the family the family members are also close to each other and increase understanding between them
To elaborate mankind was read a legend ‘ biography like Apj Abdul Kalam ,narendra Modi etc further more they increase there knowledge and learn to best quality form them for instance, apj abdul Kalam is 8th pass but he is become president of the our country.
Some layman is watching sports because the most of the matches arrange in the weekends. Few menkind are more enthusiastic for watching match for them free time and they do not spend special time with family moreover, they waste time in leisure activities.and they are feel lazy.
In the contempatary era …
In the contempatary era ,sports is the very important and crucial factor common people are wathching sports In their busy schedules as well as free time moreover, some citizen believe that That the showing sports is the waste of time is showing sports is wastage time mean while, this essay contract to given assession starting my valid reasons.
To commence with though there are several example in the ensuing paragraph. The human kind spand a quality time for the family in the free time.they have to arrange a small picnic for the family.and enjoy with them.they make this day so memorable for instance, in the survey of times of India is that the most of the people are Most of the common society have arrange the short tour for the family the family members are also close to each other and increase understanding between them
To elaborate mankind was read a legend ‘ biography like Apj Abdul Kalam ,narendra Modi etc further more they increase there knowledge and learn to best quality form them for instance, apj abdul Kalam is 8th pass but he is become president of the our country.
Some layman is watching sports because the most of the matches arrange in the weekends. Few menkind are more enthusiastic for watching match for them free time and they do not spend special time with family moreover, they waste time in leisure activities.and they are feel lazy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20542635659 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8323481069 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.305353553 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.222222222 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179324132118 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892141096218 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049055161521 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134314335834 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370863975407 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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