Shopping has become a favorite pastime among young people.
Why do you think it is like that, and do you think they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping?
Purchasing things has become a most loved hobby for young generation. This has become a trend among students because of competition with each other to look better at university. I personally believe that we should not intervene in their personal lives because finishing university studies is what matters rather than interfering in their outfits.
Buying new things has become a greatest habit among young age who go to universities because they want to present themselves better by wearing the latest outfit. This is to say, students like to compete amongst themselves by wearing new clothes based on the latest trend. As a result, going to shop for trending fashion has become a hobby for young individuals. To illustrate, in 2015, Dubai mall shopping outlets disclosed that, people under the age of 25 purchased 90% of their autumn outfits and the percentage of young visitors to this mall has been incredibly high when compared to the rest generations, since a decade.
This essay would show that it is not a good idea to involve in young adults matter because completing academics with excellence is what they aim for rather than involving in their personal behavior of outfits. In other words, people should not involve in liking of young men and women who are studying in universities because their focus is to complete studies and they divert their mind by shopping and wearing such new trendy clothes. For example, a survey conducted by Queen’s university proved that, students who has a habit of shopping, scores with a decent result when compared to those who do not.
In conclusion, young men and women are more into shopping and it has become their mandatory habit. This is purely because they want to look attractive and compete with other mates and sincerely I do not think that we have to involve in their personal matters instead of help them to focus on academics.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... outfits. Buying new things has become a greatest habit among young age who go t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9465408805 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61065576354 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8861307006 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.083333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205981131922 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080146955422 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301798169633 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135211463012 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282130480136 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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