It is undeniable to the fact that mode of communication since few years has been impacted by the advancement in technology. As this rapid change in the field of telecommunication, we have inherent certain benefits too. But some advantages some pitfalls also comes in the way. So we will be discussing the same issues in the subsequent paragraphs.
Communication has become a lot more fancy these days, this has changed the ambiance of people around us. As this has affected each individual with giving proper time to people living far but less time acquiescent to people living near you. Moreover, this development has led to increase in virtual relations.Wherein during earlier days people use to have more face-to-face interactions. Therefore this use to make us more closer and allows us to have more connections with people physically.
The convince of this advent has made world global village where everything and anything can be possible anytime. But unfortunately, the increase in social media platforms has raged a lot of issues among people's relationships be it relation of a father daughter, mother son or husband wife. However,this has also brought a revolutionary change among the peoples believe and thinking prospect.
To conclude, i totally disagree to the fact that it has a negative impact on the personal relation one carries. the matter of fact is that any relation works on the motto of trust and understanding so it doesn't matter what effects does medium of communication has it varies from one individual to another.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Wherein
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Suggestion: used
...ions.Wherein during earlier days people use to have more face-to-face interactions....
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...to have more face-to-face interactions. Therefore this use to make us more closer and all...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
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Suggestion: closer
...ractions. Therefore this use to make us more closer and allows us to have more connections ...
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...connections with people physically. The convince of this advent has made world global vi...
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...ter, mother son or husband wife. However,this has also brought a revolutionary change...
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Suggestion:
... varies from one individual to another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15476190476 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12727367526 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7280103676 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254164427984 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737922709068 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529959244691 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113321461886 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756325717839 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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