The waste human and industries generate has been detrimental to our environment for quite some time now. Most of the waste comes from manufacturing companies and plastic packaging which can’t be properly be recycled is filling our oceans and landfills. This essay will analyze the increase in waste production more deeper and suggest some measures to improve the current situation.
First of all, the increasing number of plastic packaging items from fast food centers and super markets are one of the main cause for plastic waste production. Companies use cheap variety of packaging materials such as plastic, polythene and rubber that can’t be recycled, so it’s not environmental friendly. A recent survey in New York Times has reported 6.3 billion metric tons of plastic waste has been produced in US, only 9% of that plastic waste are recycled. The waste produced in industrial companies are even more hazardous as they cannot decompose which includes soil and liquid chemical waste. For example, The National Environmental Agency has issued a warning that the Petroleum companies are second largest in producing the industrial toxic waste. Although the petroleum company’s production has increased by 15%, more than 8.5 billion tons of waste produced in a year, which is above the average scale. This is certainly a downfall for the environment and wildlife in the ecosystem we all share.
I think therefore, government need to raise this awareness to general public. It’s very important for every individual to stay vigilant and be responsible to maintain the environmental safety. The government should impose strict laws and taxes to force companies to use only bio-degradable materials for packaging purpose. Additionally, government should investigate the disposal process of industrial waste whether they are bounded to environment safety standards and regulations. These kinds of measures will persuade people and industries to use only recycle products which will eventually bring down the waste production.
To conclude, there are many reasons such as usage of plastic in packing materials and toxic industrial waste contribute the increase in waste production, however, the stringent measures and regulations from the government can definitely reduce and control the growing problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'deeper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: deeper
...nalyze the increase in waste production more deeper and suggest some measures to improve th...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ernment need to raise this awareness to general public. It’s very important for every individu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52957746479 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87129732762 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1854166152 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6875 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112496014872 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435279281664 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369875514685 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068140146773 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254106027925 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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