Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Y

Essay topics:

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.

Why do you think this is happening?

What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

The production of garbage have been hiked a lot in past couple of decades. There are various reasons leading to this increase. This easy will discuss some contributing factor in the rapid production of rubbish and few counter measures that government can take to overcome this situation.

From my point of view, several industries are responsible to create garbage at such a extent that it is now threatening the environmental conditions. Apparently, the garbage produced during the manufacturing process is not disposed off properly. As a result, the rubbish keeps on getting collected without treating it hence increasing the production rate of garbage collection. To illustrate, there has been a survey which depicts that only 10 percent of the industrial waste is disposed as per the government rules, remaining is just left untreated causing pollution and other harmful consequences.

There are several rules led by government to handle proper disposal of the garbage but most of the industries do not follow them. Government can introduce more rules for the same and should keep a track whether the given rules are followed strictly or not and the guilty should be punished setting an example for other. To show an example, the officials should specify a certain amount of fine on not treating the rubbish as required.

Taking everything into consideration, the production of garbage cannot be completely stopped but to minify the heinous results, the disposal of garbage should also be a priority. Furthermore, the rules and regulations set by should be strict and relevent enough.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aking everything into consideration, the production of garbage cannot be complete...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9183005804 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603921568627 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7119509635 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.916666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140810913805 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04935770231 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369938991829 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789224835245 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479219381824 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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