The population of people have been increased in a hasty manner. The population of humans reached seven billions all of these people produces rubbish all around the world.
The main reasons for producing more and more rubbish is our lifestyle. For example nowadays people prefers to use disposable food packages which most of them made from plastic. By the way there is two main types of rubbish. The first one Biodegradable our environments can handle with type naturally and the second one is non-biodegradable this the bad type of rubbish since our environment need many years to handle it naturally. Plastic belongs to the second type of rubbish (Non-biodegradable) i think we must use the biodegradable materials like paper bags and so on instead of non-biodegradable materials in order to reduce the rubbish.
Second reason back to lack of awareness about our ecosystem. Most of people do not know the importance of recycling materials and using a biodegradable materials. I think its individuals and governments responsibility to increase the awareness about our environment by self education and create a lectures about this topic for individuals.
Finally, the last reason back to economic reasons. For example using plastic materials instead of Eco-friendly material in industries will reduce the costs of produce operation.
As a conclusion, I think governments and individuals have to take their responsibilities about rubbish issues. More diseases and pollution will affect us in the future and maybe we will reach a road without a return if we not take a serious steps to solve this global issue.
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? 56
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Y 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a hasty manner" with adverb for "hasty"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...opulation of people have been increased in a hasty manner. The population of humans reached seven...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...produces rubbish all around the world. The main reasons for producing more and mor...
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Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...econd type of rubbish Non-biodegradable i think we must use the biodegradable mat...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
... lack of awareness about our ecosystem. Most of people do not know the importance of recycling...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'material'?
Suggestion: material
...ing materials and using a biodegradable materials. I think its individuals and government...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lecture' or simply 'lectures'?
Suggestion: a lecture; lectures
...nvironment by self education and create a lectures about this topic for individuals. Fina...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'step'?
Suggestion: step
...thout a return if we not take a serious steps to solve this global issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, second, so, for example, i think, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23166023166 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1928657746 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548262548263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5786661778 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239187588484 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831748670027 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690453916877 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114429472293 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457813853505 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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