Of late, the global population has increased in a crazy way the number of humans who lives in this world reached seven billion all of these people produces rubbish more and more to our environment. I think there are four main reasons for why this issue is happening.
First, the lack of awareness about the environment. I think the government could increase the awareness for the people about this issue by making a lectures about how to re-use the materials instead of throw it in the garbage. Second reason most of industries nowadays depends on plastic material more and more for example anyone could notice the plastics in any place he would like to look. To solve this issue i think the municipalities and governments should create laws to enforce the factories and people to use an alternative materials instead of plastic in any situation they could replace it for example they could replace the plastic bags by producing paper bags. Third reason came from our trend in these days. People like to use in their parties plastic plates and plastic cups instead of using the glass plates and cups as a result of that the rubbish will increase over and over.
In my opinion to solve this problem the governments and people should take there responsibilities about environment. If we continue in that way all of us will suffer in the future from diseases and pollution and i think we will reach a road without return.
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Y 56
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a crazy way" with adverb for "crazy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...te, the global population has increased in a crazy way the number of humans who lives in this ...
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Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lecture' or simply 'lectures'?
Suggestion: a lecture; lectures
...r the people about this issue by making a lectures about how to re-use the materials inste...
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Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the industries') or simply say ''most industries''.
Suggestion: most of the industries; most industries
... throw it in the garbage. Second reason most of industries nowadays depends on plastic material mo...
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Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...would like to look. To solve this issue i think the municipalities and government...
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Line 2, column 532, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'material'?
Suggestion: material
...tories and people to use an alternative materials instead of plastic in any situation the...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... future from diseases and pollution and i think we will reach a road without retu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, third, for example, i think, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75303643725 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55774978347 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1867761931 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189987104485 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711339811568 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556106257981 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145154005444 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639908466817 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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