Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do yuo think this is happening?
What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
These days, the amount of rubbish is seriously increasing. It might because of people want the convenience as they are using plastic a lots for shopping. This essay will discuss about the solution of decreasing large quantity of rubbish.
First of all, controlling the amount of rubbish can begin by amend the regulation or law from government. It can help people to conduct the regulation practice as it is a legally policy. Governments can provide flyers to communities which indicate the items for recycle or non-recycle, as well as the process of recycling. For example, in a restaurant, the staff can practice the regulation on government flyer like cupboards and glasses need to put in recycle bins. Government regulation can make people aware of this issue and think of it as an important activity.
What is more, educating children at school about the importance of recycling rubbish. Adding environmental lessons for children to understand about the result of over create rubbish and teach them how can we do to keep our world healthy and green. It is not only helpful for children but also their parents as school can provide homeworks that need both children and parents to complete together. Therefore, the parents are able to aware about this problem by supporting children’s homeworks.
In conclusion, the environment is getting worth day by day, due to human’s usage. I believe that this problem will be improved if government modifying the law and teaching children the right concept at school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...e convenience as they are using plastic a lots for shopping. This essay will discuss a...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('legally') instead an adjective, or a noun ('policy') instead of another adjective.
...onduct the regulation practice as it is a legally policy. Governments can provide flyers to comm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15261044177 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89694947366 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2665442484 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.6428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229322242343 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077465586814 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052388989689 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116708645297 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486658651948 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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