Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
we are living in a consumer culture world.incresing the waste produced by houses considered useless and even detriment to country thereby, people believe that authorities concerned should firmly tackle this issue. This essay will analyse that phenomena using examples from USA and Middle East countries to illustrate points and support argument.
There is multivarious reasons for huge amount of rubbish produced nowadays. First and formost, since the advertisement has been spreaded and become more attractive the rate of product sold raised as an outcome. people persuaded to buy things they do not need specially for childrens who are easly influenced by the adverts aimed to them. as aresult, parents are put on pressure to buy that products to satisfy their kids. Secondly, we could have reduced the impact of that problem if we have proper knowledge about the recycling.The American Society of Wast managment puplished research in 2018 showed that 70% of the waste produced can be recycled by simple processes.Also, the papper named 25 organizations through USA which render free assistance in collicting and reuse of all kind of rubbish.
On the other hand, government should take prombet action to address these crucial situation by forge a partnership with civil society in order to deter that phenomena.while puplic opinion assume that Advertising should be controled by parents i believe that the authorities should ban false advertisment apecially which focuse on childeren.In addition, taxs should be imposed in wasting any kind of products and also community should play a role in encouraging individuals to recycly there rubbish by offering knowledge and adequate resources.
In conclusion, rubbish production is harmfule to our life ;However, this issue can be easily solved by taking firmly action.As such, i belive we all should participate and be part of these solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43581081081 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93129376012 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662162162162 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.936820424 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.777777778 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8888888889 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187464339882 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732283135095 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573049063247 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100752115226 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595406260322 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.