Nowadays we communicate less with our family members To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer with relevant examples.
In these days the technology has arrived to the level of satisfactory compare to olden days.In the past years as the technology was not developed , people were used to communicate with their families most oftenly. In this essay i am going to dicuss advantages of communicating with othersthe reasons for less communication and also share my opinion on this view.
Firstly,i would like to discuss some importance of comminication with familiy members,such as by this we can convey the regards concerning family members.We can share our thoughts,express our feelings,can make ourselves relaxed through conversation with the family. this now a days is getting suppressed due to several reasons mostly relates to the technological development . advanced social application like face book,instagram,whatsapp have been inroduced to which people are mostly addicted towards.
Secondly, i would like to focus on various causes through which the communication is declining these days.One of the main reason is people are just tucked to thier work throghout the time these days,hence could not focus on the family member.Another reason why fellows are communicating less to thier families,as the technology is lying just on the fingertips of the people ,does not allowing them to spend time for thier dear ones.most of them are relyng on the internet for communication rather than personnel meet.Even people are familiar with advanced inernet usage most of the time.
On the otherhand,I strongly agree with the statement that people are communicating less these days.As i discussed above mostly people are binded to thier jobs ,like mostly the work is based on internet (online meetings ,video coferences,presentations),so its difficult to extract the time for their family.this should be conidered as a negative impact of technology on the personnel life. Finally,i would like to conclude by my oipnion that people should feel responsible towards thier loving family
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3903209115 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.538685725 49.4020404114 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.625 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.75 20.7667163134 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240805693165 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108299179784 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767033011776 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160107784756 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454256134045 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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