The number of people getting higher wearing fashionable clothes. Is it a good or bad situation?
The fashion industry, allowing many trendsetters to launch the distinct collections of the clothes every month, which are attracting a gigantic amount of people to try those outfits. In my belief, it will be a good opportunity for those who are directly or indirectly associated with the fashion industry in monetary terms and help in boosting the economy for the garment sector.
Firstly, when people start purchasing more goods from a specific portion of the market i.e apparel sector that aids to expand it in all the directions: hiring employees, new stores and many more. Moreover, growing growth attracts more people from other sectors where unemployment is on the rise. Consequently, employment will be provided to a larger number of individuals and give more power to purchasing the products that seem to contribute towards the growth of a country.
Secondly, any country, with the majority of the population having good attire will attract more public from outside of their country as a tourist. Furthermore, showing higher numbers of fashionable items help to lift the number of exports each year. Different varieties of clothes help an individual to dress uniquely for different occasions like formal dresses, marriage attires, sports suits and etc. For instance, France is famous for organizing most of the fashion shows in the world because people are willing to adapt to a new range of styles.
To conclude, people with dynamic choices in styles will help to gain or improve the economy on faster pace and also, add a new sector to the people who are not employed in their current fields. There are certain countries that are heavily reliant on such an industry for their sustainable growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67335444331 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.0527878966 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.727272727 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187997646761 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710776863742 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528324970776 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110778087499 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457273265268 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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