You are planning to visit another country. A member of your family lives in that country. Write to them and ask for some information. In your letter,
Identify when you last saw them
Explain where you plan to go and ask if they have any suggestions Ask if they would like to come with you
Dear Mike,
I hope you are doing good! I know its been years we haven't met, but I still remember the fun night we spent together.
I'm just writing to get some information about Australia as I'm planning a vacation for two weeks there. Do you still remember? We met in my brother's marriage that was held in Chandigarh last year on new year's eve.
I have been always excited to visit Sydney from my childhood, and now it feels like my dream come true! As of now, I will be traveling from New Delhi to Sydney on 28 October, Flight 2345 and the iternary is something like Sydney city tour, Melbourne tour, and East coast for its famous beaches . I need to get some tips on other tourist attractions if you can give me.
It will be really exciting if you can join me on the weekend trip to the famous beach, Candolim. I've booked the hotel for the stay that won't be an issue, which is located at the beach and gives a serene view of the island.
I'll share the details on the text, and let me know if that suits you. See you soon!
With love, Apoorva
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...re doing good! I know its been years we havent met, but I still remember the fun night...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ember the fun night we spent together. Im just writing to get some information ab...
^^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...get some information about Australia as Im planning a vacation for two weeks there...
^^
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...was held in Chandigarh last year on new years eve. I have been always excited to vis...
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Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
...andigarh last year on new years eve. I have been always excited to visit Sydney from my childho...
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Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r, and East coast for its famous beaches . I need to get some tips on other touris...
^^
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...end trip to the famous beach, Candolim. Ive booked the hotel for the stay that wont...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...and gives a serene view of the island. Ill share the details on the text, and let ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21393034826 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13341065789 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676616915423 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0700353823 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141068126834 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630924468602 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340175021525 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080436579966 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352666473526 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.