The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.
What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society?
How can this problem be solved?
Nowadays, large number of people have faced serious health issues such as diabetes and heart problem due to obesity. Although over weight is not considered as a big issue but it leads to other critical issues. In this essay, I will examine the major causes of increased overweight people such as laziness or love for fast food. Further, I will suggest some solutions including health related awareness programs, healthy diet that could solve this problem to some extent.
To begin with, there are various reasons for the increased number of over heavy people in our society. One of the major reason is our laziness, in this hi-tech world, we are blessed with plenty of robotic devices that had made us more lazy. For example, to no surprise, there are robotic vacuums, and even Siri and Alisa like smart devices who could even turn your television on or off just on your command. Another significant reason for the obesity among young people poor diet. In this busy lifestyle, we are so fond of junk food, frozen meals and fast food that unfortunately we ignored its negative impacts to our body.
Let’s talk about some solution to this problem. One of the easiest method is to start the awareness program that discuss the chronic health issues due to over weight and also showcase the value of good health. Another simple solution could be some cookery shows that teach how to cook healthy meals in quick time, thus in a busy lifestyle it could be possible to have healthful diet. There are very famous quotes , If there is a will, there is a way. For example, a very famous Indian singer had loose 160 kg of weight just by controlling his diet so it is just about our will power and desire to attain good physique. Also there is another famous proverb, Health is wealth, which depicts that we could enjoy every fruit of life only if our health is good.
In conclusion, obesity is the root cause of many serious problem and there is an urgent need to reduce this problem. The two primary reasons for obesity are laziness and poor diet. We could mitigate this issue by following some simple solutions such as health related awareness programs and choosing nutritious diet over fast food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75195822454 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27197386305 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527415143603 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.668141564 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.111111111 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260232321589 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815444874989 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622861645207 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160714545178 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516575513029 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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