Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich
countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
Health-related problems have piled up immensely with the advent of the twenty-first century. Likewise, nations, especially developed, are struggling with the problem of extreme overweight. This essay will discuss the root cause of obesity and suggest possible solutions.
To begin with, common lifestyle disorders are a direct consequence of the shifting of the workforce from agrarian to a mechanized and service-based economy. People's jobs are now less demanding for hard labor and physical activities. For instance, man would manually plough a piece of land themselves to earn his daily bread which nowadays could be performed single-handed with the modern farm equipments. Although most of the things can be done with a push of the button, it had substantially decreased human intervention and thus led to less physical workout of the body. However, this did not influence dietary patterns as people are still eating calorie dense foods even though they could hardly burn them to stay fit.
In the solution, a comprehensive approach to tackle the menace of obesity should be employed at a national level. It may include routine check-ups, encouraging gym training and diet plans. For example, many school canteens in the USA have removed junk food from their menus and started grading the overall built-up of the pupil. Because modern throw-away culture is rampant in rich countries, it demands Governments play a larger role to help curb obesity. Therefore, selective taxation on high calorie meal is capable of containing the obesity limits of the nation.
In conclusion, the meaning of lifestyle is not restricted to fulfilling basic needs like food and clothing. Therefore, a collective effort must come from society to ensure that the way of living must be altered to match the contemporary world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 568, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ining the obesity limits of the nation. In conclusion, the meaning of lifestyle ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, likewise, may, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34146341463 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89452891859 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689895470383 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5456635513 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0944613420601 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293420541162 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374178059732 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601759206478 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061281322879 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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