One of the most serious problems that cities now face is crime. Why are crime rates increasing in cities? What are the most effective measures to tackle crime in urban areas?
Violent crime is deeply rooted in some developing countries, particularly in big cities. Urban citizens are now facing a large number of criminals who commit violent crimes owing to economic deprivation and heroine and alcohol addiction. In order to deal with this problem, the government and each person need to take action. There are various solutions which should be implemented. This essay will indicate the significant causes of violent criminalization and offer measures to bringing down high rates.
Firstly, poverty is one of the main reasons for violent offense. In fact, there are fewer jobs than applicants in big cities, which resulted in widespread deprivation of unemployed people. The poor do not have the means to secure a living in right ways and invest their time in criminal activities to get what they wants. Moreover, the wealth inequality and insufficient living condition is driving the poor to involve in gangters organization that makes money from collecting illegal debts, threatening people, kidnaping, blackmailing or even murdering. To tackle this issue, the government should create more jobs opportunities for unemployed people to acquire adequate life. Furthermore, local authority ought to hire more police officers to improve security, which would keep local people safe and decline crime rates.
Secondly, alcohol and drugs are considered the factors which lead people to a life of violence. Under the influence of alcohol, the brain’s functions can change and make people unintentionally start fights or physical assault others. Similarly, drugs addiction urges addicts to fill up drugs every minute of day, otherwise, it can make them lose control, lead to damage behaviour and hurt their loved ones. The way forward must be taken by the government as well as each person. Legislation should be enforced and violent criminals have to be punished strictly by the governmeny. Schools should carry out programs and extracurriculars for students to raise awareness of the dangers of alcohol and drugs. Adults should be good examples of healthy lifestyle for children to follow.
In conclusion, apart from poverty, drugs and alcohol addiction is also the main contributor to acts of violence in big cities and several measures are suggested to handle the situation. This problem should be adressed as soon as possible, for instance, creating jobs, improving security, punishing offenders strictly by the government, enhancing consciousness of the threat of alcohol consumption.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...g cities. Urban citizens are now facing a large number of criminals who commit violent crimes owi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...in criminal activities to get what they wants. Moreover, the wealth inequality and in...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge and make people unintentionally start fights or physical assault others. Simil...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47557840617 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89946032279 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619537275064 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9441157122 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.45 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999696261746 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268605834037 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399618400407 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641359230446 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499061257051 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...g cities. Urban citizens are now facing a large number of criminals who commit violent crimes owi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...in criminal activities to get what they wants. Moreover, the wealth inequality and in...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge and make people unintentionally start fights or physical assault others. Simil...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47557840617 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89946032279 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619537275064 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9441157122 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.45 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999696261746 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268605834037 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399618400407 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641359230446 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499061257051 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.