The only reason to work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Money is a necessity that acts as the motivation to work hard for most of the people. Currently there is a contentious argument that whether one’s motivation to work should be either money or not. I totally disagree that the stimulation behind job should be money as I believe that deriving joy from our work should be the impetus for our work and not financial necessity.
Beyond any qualms there a myriads of logical reasons that prove that money should not be the motivation to work hard but rater job satisfaction should be the main focus. There comes a point of time when a person who hates his work and is just doing it for the sake of money starts showing temper and other psychological issues. Statistical analysis shows that two third of the people living in metro cities of India suffer from depression and psychological issues due to insufficient job satisfaction. They continue working in MNCs to provide support for their family and themselves financially and meanwhile suffer from mental health issues. Suicide rate is constantly increasing in urban population and the main cause is linked to cognitive stress due to stressful work environment.
On the contrary some people believe that job satisfaction is a luxury that only few can engage. There are millions of people who work hard not because they enjoy what they do but for the sake of money. Money is the prime necessity for survival on this planet. Without money a person loses his worth in the society. For example, a laborer cannot start complaining that he does not enjoy his work and leave job. Also, a well-qualified professional working in a multinational complaint cannot abruptly decide to leave job just because he does not enjoy his work as he has to look after the family and his monthly EMI. However, if such people continue to work then it is likely to deteriorate their mental health.
In conclusion, I believe that we have only one life and there is no purpose of living when we are not happy. On an average a person spends two-third of his time in his workplace. When that time is spend in anxiety and stress than sooner or later the person is likely to suffer mentally, emotionally and physically as well. Therefore, it is necessary that we love our work and not spend our golden years to work for money. Would this generation understand this problem? Still remains a question.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a myriad' or simply 'myriads'?
Suggestion: a myriad; myriads
...al necessity. Beyond any qualms there a myriads of logical reasons that prove that mone...
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Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...ut rater job satisfaction should be the main focus. There comes a point of time when a per...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ime in his workplace. When that time is spend in anxiety and stress than sooner or la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, third, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78780487805 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67006339784 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8538519944 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4761904762 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5238095238 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22151402158 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661554142272 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596428552063 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137032580818 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423572203676 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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