Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is suggested that everyone should change the eating habit to vegetarianism because eating meat might have negative effect for the well-being. I personally disagree with this statement and will discuss my reasons in the following.
To begin with, the meat products contain a variety of essential materials which the body needs them to work properly. To exemplify, the people’ body needs proteins to improve the muscles and recuperate damaging tissues. The numerous amounts of this vital nutrient are found in the different meat including turkey, beef, lamb and fish. Furthermore, some evidence shows the protein deficiency can increase the risk of some illnesses in individuals. For instance, the scientific studies indicated the lack of proteins in children diet can cause the devastating conditions on their physical mobility, growth and intellectual ability.
Nevertheless, it is understandable why some people concern about the eating meat. The main reason is due to the excessive consumption of meat especially beef, and lamb which is harmful for the body health. In fact, people who excessively consume this sort of food in their routine diet suffer from some serious diseases such as high blood pressure, heart issues and obesity. However, nutrition specialists believe a moderate regime in the combination of fruits, vegetables and meat might be a best choice for everybody.
To conclude, although eating much meat might cause serious health issues for individuals, the omitting of it from the diet might also do. Therefor, it is recommended everybody follows a balanced regime from both food groups.
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...of fruits, vegetables and meat might be a best choice for everybody. To conclude...
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... balanced regime from both food groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in fact, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42063492063 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85766088778 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626984126984 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9662532086 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181220504498 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578178998773 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574927790218 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115306026757 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422381862954 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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