The only way to improve the safety on our own road is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
An increasing concern for may people around the world is road accidents.With the new technology and requirements the car becomes more significant in society.Obviously, within this developments bring it some rules for individuals safe.In this essay I will examine both sides of this arguments and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, number of driver are increasing in this decant. Main reason for this increasing is effortless transportation by a vehicles. However, most of people when choosing the private or public transportation they ignore some basic vital point. Following the rules. I partially agree the punishment issue for irresponsible person such as dangerous drunk drivers. First of all, ensure of safety travel on road is could be within some restriction. Therefore, when the drivers if want to be drink some alcohol they must be use the public transportation for other people and their safe. If the policeman catch this people when drunk as a driver must be implement penalty. For illustration, the driver licenses could be canceled.Or some young drivers doing a race with the other cars. This might be too dangerous for all people around the road or pavement. This people could be appropriate for the penalty as a volunteer.Such as a this things could be improve the safe road for community.
Moreover, the penalty is not enough for all kind of people. For the against this sort of drivers the education is mandatory. The school of driver is might be covered more detail more than the recent. For example, the tutors be able to give first aid lecture for drivers with this way the drivers might be learn how important the human life. Or if they want to be graduate the course they could be must watch video such as human life and accidents. By this education could be increase the development on the road for society.For illustration, if the drivers can be respect the life they could be understand why become a driver is very vital.
In my view of opinion, I partially agree the just one side effect on people. Therefore it must be use contribute of education with punishment system for the safe travel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, kind of, sort of, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89093730336 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494413407821 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.4641968954 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0413228644622 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0169863073099 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223183856453 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0276832090344 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132563461325 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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