In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use their money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such solutions?
Many decisions can be taken by governments to improve public transportation, to solve traffic problems. One of these solutions taxing private car owners, but for such solution there are advantages and disadvantages.
On one hand, many advantages will impact positively on society and our daily life. First, tax private car owners will lead to decrease in number of vehicles especially among cities. Citizens won't stuck in their cars due to traffic jams, they will be encouraged to start using public transportation for moving such as trams, buses and trains. However, air and noise pollution will decrease and people will have a green and healthier environment. For example, in 2014 at Footscray train station in Melbourne, because of the taxes that the government imposed on private cars, a renovation was done to accept big number of passengers, where services and facilities are provided for passengers to feel comfortable.
On the other hand, obliging people to pay high taxes on their private cars also have disadvantages. Many sectors will close and number of unemployment will increase. The income of government from petrol taxes will decrease, which force the government to fire their staff and pay their pensions. Moreover, cars manufacturers will shut down their businesses and sales ratio will be affected and lead to losses. However, government will collapse in the rate of tariff due to decline in number of cars and spare parts import. For example, at the end of 2014 Ford cars manufacturers in Geelong Australia, decided to stop producing cars due to the high taxes that the government imposed on vehicles and the number of sales decreased heavily.
As a conclusion, many advantages and disadvantages will impact on people and government, for such solutions. In my opinion, I believe that the right resolution is improving public transportation and encourage people to use these alternatives, to have healthier and un-stressful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30868167203 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97763432604 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527331189711 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1571000829 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.066666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295277969104 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107778969218 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800259670841 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218802226188 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117965787461 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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