ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Should private schools receive government funding?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Schooling is a very important part of every child's life. It builds a foundation for the child's future hence it should not be compromised. There are various schools that are funded by the government and other which are private. Usually schools that are run by the government require a minimal amount as a fee where as private schools can be as expensive as 2 lakhs annually for just grade 1!
No doubt, private schools not only focus on academics but also focus on the extra curricular activities and provide numerous facilities to the child. Now a days few private schools in India have introduced their own curriculum where the child studies the best of both boards - CBSE as well as CISCE until grade 7 after which the student can choose either of the two boards to graduate in. This provides flexibility to the child as well as the parents to understand where the child can do better at!
Private schools tie up with many other schools for inter-school competitions that give so much exposure to students that the government school lacks currently.
Every child has a right to education, However, private schools charge fees so high, that only a few middle class parents can afford sending their children to. Therefore, I strongly feel that private schools should receive government funding. This will not only bring down the fee without hampering the quality of education, but also not create a difference between higher class and middle class children. Every child must be treated equally irrespective of their parent's financial status.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...nment require a minimal amount as a fee where as private schools can be as expensive as ...
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Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ovide numerous facilities to the child. Now a days few private schools in India have intro...
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Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... studies the best of both boards - CBSE as well as CISCE until grade 7 after which the stu...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to send'.
Suggestion: to send
...y a few middle class parents can afford sending their children to. Therefore, I strongl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96138996139 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58345612739 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.223620654 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151800297479 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736489050213 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609570360178 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102829777816 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341011718358 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.