Overpopulation is rising at an alarming rate in major cities around the word day by day hence. It is caused by the migration of rural people. And building educational institutions and industries in villages is the most viable solution to this problem.
To being with , although there are plenty of schools and colleges in rural cities, there are very few universities. This encourages many aspiring students to migrate to cities in order to pursue their higher education. Therefore, people prefer to live in urban areas to secure their future as well as their new generation's. For instance, a survey conducted by Punjabi University Patiala shows the report that 65% of the total population of the countryside area moved to big cities. Some of them shifted to receive good jobs and others to pursue their higher study in international colleges to get their dreem job.
On the other hand, every problem has seeds of solution within it, likewise, this problem can be solved by implementing various measures. In addition, the government should encourage industries to set up their business operations in the rural places This would foster employment and give rise to job opportunities in this rural places. For example, Gujarat government has taken several measures to establish universities and industries in the district of Anand , this has drastically reduced the population in cities such as Ahmedabad and Baroda.
In conclusion, if government takes necessary steps to build measures, the issue of overpopulation can be tackled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, likewise, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27755102041 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95044218419 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636734693878 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2637261456 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257860699381 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825888764074 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728767942502 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14660266793 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710155650564 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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