Could you please assess my level of writing. I will be writing essay for the given question.
Well, a human being is gauged by his Knowledge. Preserving the knowledge and sharing with people is very essential.
On one hand, storing and sharing knowledge through books is a traditional approach.Ancient scholars have used this way as their medium of information. 'Authenticity' can be one of the major factors, as the references and the copyright of their work is accounted.
Having said that, writing down books is a time-consuming process as lot of manual intervention is required to reach them to its end users.Also, the search operation is complex if we are precisely looking for a piece of text, even though the information is present in it. Besides them, to make papers, millions of trees are curtailed every year causing serious effect to our ecosystem.
On the other hand, since the technology has grown immensely when compared to past, the usage of internet has become more convenient. It is easy to store and spread our work through various websites or blogs or forums. One can access it easily in no time. Now-a-days,'Internet' is considered as the quickest medium of information to people. Also, writing, reading and searching through internet for any information is on finger tips to any computer literate.
On contrary, like every coin has both the sides, even the Internet storing has some cons. 'Reliability' is one of the major concerns as their work is not referenced. Also, it is impossible to access without an internet connection.
In a nutshell, sharing and storing on the Internet has the greater advantages when compared to books. So, I opine with the given statement.
- In the past, people like to store knowledge in books. At present, we like to store on the internet. Do you think advantages out-weight the disadvantages? 80
- In the past, people like to store knowledge in books. At present, we like to store on the internet. Do you think advantages out-weight the disadvantages? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ancient
...through books is a traditional approach.Ancient scholars have used this way as their me...
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Line 6, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...required to reach them to its end users.Also, the search operation is complex if we ...
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Line 8, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Internet
... access it easily in no time. Now-a-days,Internet is considered as the quickest medium of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, then, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04982206406 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97909196209 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.0267423494 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188571092911 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496620065056 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617903934555 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082665245692 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494751012565 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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