People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
It is rightly said that a strong society gives the way to a strong nation. It is quite common that nowadays many offsprings are highly addicted to substance abuse both legally and illegally. According to experts, there is no one to blame other than parental figures and other grown-ups in society. I believe that peer pressure and parental influences are the promoters for young blood to consume drugs which results in an imbalance in health conditions and finance.
One of the major influencing factors of the addiction towards the drug substances is the pressure from the friends. In other words, at the beginning of the teenage period, the generation gives more value to the tongue of peers rather than parents and relatives. An organization of scientists and medical experts reveals that from a recent survey almost three-quarters of drug addiction is the direct result of compulsion or motivation from similarly aged citizens. Above that the added that twenty per cent of clients who visited different hospitals in the country expressed that they started using drugs as either father or mother was a serious drug addict.
As a consequence of the regular consumption of substances, many of the people face major health issues. To put it in another way, the contents of each drug endanger the internal organs and badly influence the thought patterns of individuals. The wounds which are the aftermath of drugs may transform to non-curable illness like cancer etcetera as many studies show diseases like cancer are the direct result of inhalation of chemical substances come from drugs, pre-processed food and alcoholic products.
Moreover, drug addiction is disadvantaged in economic perspective as children from middle class or economically disturbed families are promoted to use the product. Once they start consuming the drugs, the addictive nature of the substance promote them to steal money from home, and even they engage in other criminal offences contributing enough earnings to meet their needs. A senior psychologist from the Indian Medical Association (IMA-Delhi) recently announced that a higher proportion of (75 – 80%) juvenile criminals started committing crimes as an aftermath of drug abuse.
To conclude, many of the young generations are addicted to substance abuse both legally and illegally. I do not stand completely with the statement as the similarly aged group has a major role in promoting younger to consume drugs than parents and other citizens which can end up in disturbed medical and financial conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30295566502 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83141229443 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564039408867 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9554722214 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5625 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119581300426 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399527827784 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0211352110119 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707659684345 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271448711856 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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