Business nowadays are extensively using advertisements to promote their products. Although there are a lot of positives in this strategy yet there is an argument these can have negative affects too. In my opinion there are both pros and cons involved but the positives outweigh the negatives.
Advertising is a great medium of raising awareness among individuals about a certain business or a product. Business use it nowadays to establish a connect with various age groups depending on what they want to sell. For example, signing a youth icon to endorse for latest fashion brands can be a great way of targeting the teenage population and thus helping in generating more revenues. Advertising whether in TV, newspapers or digital media is also a great source of employment as preparing an advertisement would involve a team of content writers, editors, directors etc.
However, there are certain adverse aspects related to advertising as well. Companies tend to make false claims in promotions to attract customers which can be harmful. For example, some companies claim to cure diseases with their products even if there is no medical justification which proves the same. There are certain products which can be unhealthy for children but are advertised in a way that kids force their parents to buy it for them. For e.g. advertisements for candies, sweeteners etc. often try to connect with kids without explaining the harmful effects of these products.
In conclusion advertising, if used with caution and not conceal information about a product, is a great tool for establishing a connect with customers which can help in generating more employment and revenues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., however, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23791821561 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93672297665 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5676813377 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12059599329 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433477713826 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300752655951 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071293503856 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435098607763 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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