People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Write at least 250 words
A vast multitude of the society understand the significance of education these days. There are various reasons driving young ones to attend schools and colleges. I think striving to have better career prospects and thirst for knowledge and new experiences are the major factors for this trend.
Better education implies better opportunities. Individuals with higher level of education are preferably considered at the job market in all the major fields, be it be technological or medical or marketing. Also, master equivalent graduates have an advantage of being recruited at campus selection and even have chances of taking up research fellowships. An example for this case is most of the global leaders of the leading multinational companies in the world are graduates from universities.
Furthermore, university education creates scope for the students to explore new advancements in their particular field of the study and research. Their skills will be nurtured under the guidance of research scholars and well reputed professors in the schools, which the dropouts and individuals who get into Job cycle with basic education, miss out. Adding to this, Universities such as university of Cambridge and The Harvard University which are considered as the premium schools in the world offer fellowship to the students who excel and award doctorates for their works contributed. Hence, students are willing to take up tertiary education to conduct research, to acquire in-depth concepts and to experience field specific evolution.
In conclusion, even though, the reasons for taking up higher educations are many, career improvement and knowledge acquisition are the vital aspects influencing people to attend universities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58935361217 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03919087459 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1335757667 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185788845161 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675665724214 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765451037529 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132233516737 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073733689589 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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