People born today can expect to live longer than people in previous generations. What are some of the positive and negative implications of this phenomenon?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People who arrived in today's advanced world, can expect themselves to live longer than people in previous generations. The life expectancy has been gradually increased over the period of time due to science and medicine research. There are many advantages and disadvantages of this fact which could be faced by people and nation. In this essay, I will discuss further the benefits and drawbacks of the long-lived life in this progressive era.
First of all, one of the great advantage of long-lived life is that older people can use their personal experience to guide government and corporations in the development of a nation. In addition, they can spend more and more time with their grandchildren and guide them further to grow in their careers. For instance, government authorities and private companies hire older executives to make strategies for their organizations growth, they also help authorities to make critical decisions at different stages. At this point, it is needless to say that older people are burden at their old ages.
On the other hand, longevity can also leads to nightmare for some older people, when their children treat them badly and ignore them completely. Furthermore, their children do not support them financially, as a result, they have to work hard at the old ages to survive, and this leads to many physical problems among them. Moreover, old people face many social issues when they deal with day to day activities, youngsters ignore them when they search for job at old ages and travelling to long distances.
To sum up, I would say that every coin has two sides. Firstly, the future impact of longer life expectancy could have potential risks, which includes physical disabilities and other critical illness. However, it can be beneficial for many of us, because retired people could help in many ways to leverage business opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12987012987 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77266644296 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561688311688 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1267329515 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181140622779 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704997556225 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775658901753 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119512480981 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724153396404 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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