People in the current generation are not fit and active and it will cause health problems in future. What could be the reasons and suggest solutions for this issue.
Nowadays, people are adopting sedentary lifestyle and physical activity is reduced in their daily routine which is a leading cause of obesity among individuals and in future it will contribute to various non communicable diseases. This essay aims to at discussing reasons and possible solution for this issue in subsequent paragraphs.
There are various reasons which leads to diseases among individuals and made current generation unfit and inactive. Initially, there is so much advancement in technology that number of gadgets are available which have taken our place for carrying out daily activities. To cite an example, now washing machines are used to wash clothes as compared to earlier times when people used to wash clothes with hands. Thus,machines made people lazy by making life easier and comfortable. Additionally, eating behaviour of people have changed drastically. According to world health organisation,today's generation have included 40% of junk food in their daily diet which is a leading cause of disease like hypertension, obesity, diabetes etc. In future,this approach will cause other illnesses as well and will reduce life expectancy of people.
On the other hand, there are many possible solutions which can be adopted by citizens to prevent these problems. First of all, people should change their lifestyle and do physical activity in daily routine work. For example, while going to office, people should go by walk rather than going by vehicle. Above all, government should organize awareness campaigns to male people aware for staying healthy. So,these solutions can be adopted to stay fit and healthy.
In, conclusion having considered all the points elaborated above it can be stated that advancement in technology has made people lazy and unhealthy. However, various measures are available which be adopted to make life more fruitful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49310344828 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86303473527 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3000687782 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257902782923 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773238245252 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433491121775 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145385833854 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487132531522 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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