People in the current generation are not fit and active, and it will cause health problems in the future. What could be the reasons and suggest solutions for this issue
It is said, ‘Health is wealth’.
General observation has that the new age people lead unhealthy and inactive life, if this trend continues without corrective actions there will be major health crisis in the near future. The primary reason for this is the interjection of technology in everyone’s day to day life. With awareness campaigns on benefits of local food and exercise we can make people conscious about their overall health. I will further elaborate on this in the upcoming paragraphs.
With the advancement in science and technology, the everyday life of an individual has become dependent on machines, in other words technology has made, man their slave. In the quest of making life simple and easy, man has somewhere lost his own self. The younger generation mostly has desk job, making them sit in one place for almost 10 to 12 hours everyday, the commute is also mechanical, leaving very less time for any other activity, so to do any physical activity the person has to make an extra effort by pushing himself outdoors for a run or a walk, otherwise need to enroll him/her to any sports and fitness club. Unless an individual does not take the effort, there is no way a person can indulge in any form of physical activity, as rest all our jobs have been overtaken by technology.
Government has a vital role to play to make their people healthy and fit, they should encourage public to use cycles to commute, a separate cycling track throughout the city should be built. Schools should emphasize more on exercise and children made aware of ill effects of being lazy and inactive. Junk food be taxed heavily, local produce and farming be encouraged. Only when the local body supports a cause, it will have larger reach and higher success rate.
Finally, to have a healthier and active future generation, the technology usage is to make life better and not easy. The benefits of everyday balanced diet and regular physical work should be campaigned throughout the year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 352, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... in one place for almost 10 to 12 hours everyday, the commute is also mechanical, leavin...
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Line 9, column 362, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ace for almost 10 to 12 hours everyday, the commute is also mechanical, leaving very less t...
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Line 17, column 134, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...fe better and not easy. The benefits of everyday balanced diet and regular physical work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, as to, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97050147493 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65814284981 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625368731563 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8934885312 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175146966505 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545838244602 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477343948012 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883957649835 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711313825373 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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