People eat more processed food than they did in the past, why is this and what are the effects of this?
In the 21st century, with the furtherance of food processing technology,variety of packed food items are available to general public. Easy to eat packed foods also known as fast foods, are popular choice of public due to their fast availability and prolonged shelf-life. In this essay reasons for the trend of increased consumption of less nutritional and fortified foods to that of, the earlier times is put forth.
The native staple diets are getting replaced by junk items by due to fast pace and industrial culture. it has been observed that industrial culture making life busier hence, working class prefers time-saving options for food. The time-saving items are pre-mixed items, ready to cook, ready to serve packets and beverages for snacks and main meals. such variety of snacks and lunch options replace home-made food as well as tiffins at work as well.So with the modern life style and multiple meal options it is noted that the diet have become more unhealthy than past.
With the food processing to meet extended self-life and enhance convenience, orignal diet traditions are vanishing along with health. First, food processing makes natural food stuff to lose nutrition content during processing and this produces food with empty calories, such as potato chips. Secondly various processes make food less organoleptic and this compensated by addition of synthetic additives and pigments such as dyes and salts.Together empty calories and supplemental chemicals cause harm to vital organs as well as weight gain. With the more and more inclusion of such non-conventional in the diet it has become for common reason of health problems.
In conclusion,the unhealthy diets habits and meal options altogether leads to various health complications and cost us well-being and money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35563380282 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85120616788 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.747188042 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199240031029 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705915922006 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577808181434 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103201814536 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755858784626 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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