People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
new Roman","serif"">The rapid development of information technology has resulted in a wide range of changes in humans’ lives. Lots of people quickly accept these and apply them to their daily routines, as well as their work, while others refuse to do so and continue doing things the same old ways. As a result, a variety of problematic circumstances arise that they are unable to predict.
new Roman","serif"">First and foremost, if people reject to move with the high speed of change in life, they will be put behind others’ backs. Consequently, they cannot catch up with the rapid evolution of humanity’s society and be less productive at work. What is more, opposing changes restricts their access to new, potentially beneficial opportunities they are given. For instance, editors, journalists, youtubers are the people who must continually be aware of current trends in order to adapt them to their work products and provide unique contents to audiences. Furthermore, the impacts on people’s activation should be carefully considered as one of the problems. others who consistently deny new information will not be as active as those who are likely to change more in both daily lives and careers.
new Roman","serif"">Giving these people various opportunities to change, from little to large, is one of the most commonly discussed solutions, which helps them progressively adapt to the new surroundings and the changes being occurring in their lives. Moreover, those around them should inform them of how beneficial the changes are and that accepting new things is not difficult at all. Sometimes, we must make breakthroughs in order to unlock the doors that may contain much greatness inside.
new Roman","serif"">To conclude, changes lead to many new and different colors in our life paintings. it makes no difference whether changes are positive or negative, people’s lives will so unfantastic if they do not take any unique steps to change. it is worthwhile to make changes in order to make our life more colorful.
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- People naturally resist making changes in their lives What kind of problems can this cause What solutions can you suggest 78
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic People naturally resist making changes in their lives What kind of problems can this cause What solutions can you suggest Write at least 250 words 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.00186947299 2.80592935109 178% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578461538462 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7977219355 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.466666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117107549656 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494049381683 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395861446707 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815899813056 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233436235083 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.