People should never eat meat because raising animals for human consumption is cruel.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
I believe people should be discouraged to eat meat for various reasons. Namely, a cruelty act involved in raising animals in the barn for mass consumption nowadays as well as the availability of protein from plant-based sources.
The human consumption on meat is steadily increasing these days and I think it is alarming. In the past, animals were raised in the free-range area where they wandered around freely and they were fed with natural foods such as grass, rice, wheats , and hays. Recently, however, a lot of animals will be placed in the overcrowded barn and therefore, they cannot move around easily. It is also common for these animals to be raised only indoor due to the limitation of open, green spaces. Thus, diseases will be spread easily, and infected animals will suffer a great deal of pain and discomfort in those closed spaces. Moreover, they will be fed with synthetic foods loaded with calories to grow and fatten them up faster so they can be slaughtered merely for meat consumption.
Another reason why people should be encouraged to eat less meat is due to the availability of rich protein sources from plant-based foods. It is known that protein is an essential for us and it cannot be produced by our body, thus, we need to consume it from our foods. It is found that plant-based diets contain as much protein as animal-based foods. By adding lots of vegetables and fruits into our diets, people can fulfill their protein needs even without eating meat in daily basis. Moreover, plant-based foods are loaded with higher fiber content which cannot be obtained from meats. Therefore, people should not be worried to lack of protein in their bodies by varying plant-based meals in their daily food intake.
To sum up, animals raised for purely human consumption is a cruel act and therefore should be discouraged. People should be made aware that there are other ways to obtain good source of proteins from plant-based diets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, i think, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92145015106 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58639897267 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6040850952 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.8125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211557405311 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864643763272 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637268907479 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163908238254 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479908236087 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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