people sleep less than before in many countries. why people sleep less? what effect does it have individually and in society?
Unlike the past when humans could enjoy a sufficient sleep, numerous contributing factors ban them from a sweet long sleep in today’s world. Lack of sleeping time impacts upon all, both individually and as a community.
It is regularly argued that the balanced triangle of career, sleeping and entertainment brings a complete healthy lifestyle to bear; hence, maximizing each facet, working excessively or having too much enjoyment, would be responsible for shortage in sleeping. To clarify more, hold to high living standards in this hectic life and being confronted with frequent intractable problems on a daily basis forced people to do extra working hours along with the need to absorb more fulfillment. If a person desire to attain a general welfare, he/she may force to work harder, therefore, the need for amusement will elevates in order to tolerate the status quo.
The newly adverse trend of shrinking sleeping time due to excessive work time and entertainment’s requirements has had detrimental effects on people as a society or separately. Individuals undergo lack of energy and being tired. Furthermore, they gradually show signs of insomnia disorder. Not only does frequent sleep deprivation impact a person on a short run tiredness, but also it ensue in mild insomnia illness in long-term based on scientific findings. On the other hand, society would fall into less concentrated workforce during a daytime which will engender in less inventive human capital in a nation. Present though employees are at their job, their alertness drop down due to sleep deprivation. Moreover, innovation requires highly focused representatives who can concentrate on the comprehensive perspective of major challenges to come up with a sound standpoint.
In conclusion, undue hardship in and excessive pleasure time are sources of slashing sleep deprivation and it may affect a person to hold tiredness and insomnia disorder cum society deprives from a vigilant, conscious workforce.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 609, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'elevate'
Suggestion: elevate
... therefore, the need for amusement will elevates in order to tolerate the status quo. T...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ensues'?
Suggestion: ensues
...n on a short run tiredness, but also it ensue in mild insomnia illness in long-term b...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44193548387 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11464768102 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683870967742 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3111972111 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.769230769 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222924672102 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662524383143 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495172904323 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119465806896 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603500737842 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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