people sleep less than before in many countries. why people sleep less? what effect does it have individually and in society?
In most of the countries, people are sleep deprived. Working over-time and excessive screen time are the two major reasons behind this. Sleeping fewer hours not only has a detrimental effect on an Individual’s mental and physical health but also hampers his social life.
Nowadays, people over the world do not get enough sleep. With increasing competition and to meet the targets, professionals spend most of their time working. Moreover, excessive exposure to electronic gadgets like mobile phones, laptops, and video games has also reduced sleep time. For Example, in a survey conducted by Asian Times, it was found that almost 78% of the Asian population sleep late at night, either because they bring their office work to their home or they become so much indulged in electronic devices that they remain unaware of the sleep hours they had wasted on screen.
Furthermore, sleeping less has several consequences both on individuals as well as society. People sleeping less usually suffer from diseases such as obesity, migraine, and insomnia. They cannot apply themselves to their work which in turn leads to depression. Not sleeping for adequate hours also has social repercussions. People become anxious and start losing temper. They no more remain socially active and easily fall into arguments. These arguments sometimes lead to legal actions.
In conclusion, sleeping patterns in several countries have drastically changed. The main causes for this sleep deprivation are spending most of the time working and also too much involvement in technological devices. This is not only deteriorating human health but also having a negative impact on their social behavior.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39393939394 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76335558116 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.4188114633 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7647058824 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25414366478 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921804906563 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918848688868 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159716008869 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515964643274 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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