People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before. Is it postive or negative development.
In the modern era, people invest huge amounts of capital on numerous things, as masses make a lot of money as compared to the older times. In my opinion, this trend has a negative impact on society which increases consumerism and tension among the people.
To begin with, the huge spending on articles has a detrimental effect on the environment. If there is an increase in production of goods then it will also rise in a dump of wastage which has plastic and heavy metals that would be thrown into the sea. For example, the Indian ocean is the largest dumping ground for consumer goods which affects the ecosystem of the oceans and also contains heavy metals which would be moved to the body of human beings after the consumption of seafood. Moreover, consumerism has also developed mental pressure among children and parents. When adolescents demand these costly products after imitating from their peers, it disturbed the economic budget of the parents. Consequently, the relationship could be affected and sometimes extreme steps are taken by the teenagers in the form of involvement in illegal activities to purchase these products.
Although spending money on these goods has deleterious effects on society, it may inspire an individual to live a qualitative life. For instance, people purchase luxurious things to enjoy better services and functions of a product to live a life peacefully. However, this materialistic world could hamper a family relationships and environment on the toll of personal pleasure.
Overall, I strongly believe that this trend of spending money on goods would affect our mental health, family bonding and pollute our aqua system.
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| 2020-05-23 | Sewak Singh | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21402214022 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75655388916 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7352122321 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120077900667 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428375643597 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449565214766 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692932613522 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045737970821 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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